Draft of Rhetorical Analysis

In the following blog post I will include a link to my draft of my rhetorical analysis and inform my peers of some of the areas in the document where I have concerns and wish to be addressed in a peer review.

For this analysis, I'm concerned that my ideas are all over the place and my use of evidence is not as strong as it should be. I'm also uncertain as to whether I discuss the debate itself enough, or focus too heavily on the rhetorical analysis.

HERE is a link to my document.

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