Draft of Open Letter

In the following blog post I will provide a link to my open letter reflection on my writing, as well as provide my peers with a paragraph regarding the strengths and weaknesses of my draft and what they should edit for.

I'm feeling alright about the content itself, but I'm concerned about the format. For one, I don't know for certain if I need the address element. Those seemed to be present in many of the completed exampled I looked at, but I'm not sure they're needed for the context I'm writing this letter. I'm also a little concerned about the introduction paragraph. Many of the descriptions of semi-formal letters I looked at included an introduction like this, but I'm worried it's not quite right. If I could get comments regarding those and other semi-formal letter conventions, that would be awesome.

HERE is a draft of my open letter.

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