Draft of Public Argument

In the following blog post, I'll be providing a link to my draft of Project 3.

vincent.zp "Drafting Tools Set" 12/23/09 via Flickr.com

HERE is a link to my project 3.

I'm a little concerned about my use of images as well as the coherency of my ideas and feel that they really need to have a fluid connection and I think I'm lacking in that area. I'd love to get some feedback regarding the transition of ideas and how the images contribute to the argument as a whole.