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My approach to writing tends to be an efficient and effective, especially with my writing style. When I plan too heavily, I write with a lot of what I call fluff. My writing becomes cushioned by unnecessarily wordy descriptions and repetitive sentences. It is through my revision that I trim down this fluff and structure a more direct piece of writing. I write in a style that relies on a clear progression of logic, and writing it out all in one go then revising heavily helps me to sort out the ideas and elaborate where they may be lacking. However, this approach doesn't always work in the long run because if I do fall short in the revision area, the piece can come across as scattered, disorganized, and wordy. It is because I have fallen into that trap before, I'm focused on the revision process.
In regards to approaching writing differently, I may want to try a sequential composure method of structuring my ideas before writing. It won't be as dense and wordy as it would be if I were to plan heavily, but simply help me organize my ideas before the revision process.
REFLECTION:
After reading through the posts of Michael Gregory Fisher and Laurence Wolf I came to understand just how different everyone is when it comes to approaching writing and how they feel about their own styles. I have always loved writing and reading through the posts of my classmates, its refreshing to know that other people do as well. It's a much different environment than a high school english class where a good two thirds of the students hate to topic. I found reliability in Laurence's style and process, seeing that we're both heavy revisor. In Michaels post, I found a lot of insight as to how someone with a different writing style thinks and progresses through their writing. Both posts opened my eyes to just how aware people are of their own writing and their feelings toward it.
Hi, I'm a student in section 3. Now that the semester is winding down, has your plan to compose sequentially and structure your ideas before writing worked out? Has your writing style actually changed over the course of the semester?
ReplyDeleteI have the same issue as you of writing with "fluff" in my first draft. Much of my revision tends to be paring down sentences and writing things in more concise ways. I think that I have gotten a little bit better over the semester at doing this in the first draft rather than through revision. How have you changed in this regard? Do you still find yourself writing with fluff in the first draft and having to edit it out?